The comparison that I can draw is that girls trying to look cute and taking selfies of themselves and looking in the mirrors. Girls buys clothes to look cute for dates and anything that ladies wear. They want something cute to wear everyday and whenever they want. Girls have to loose weight and exercise everyday and they have to eat healthy foods. They should protect innocence because they was younger and they do bad things like drugs and go to parties everytime and it helps them to be better than they are, For example, When someone gets in trouble by their parents and they go to parties and they have to suffer the consequence for their actions.
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